Your
forced
entry
leaks
into
my heart.
I’m more
accustomed
to
tracing
desire
on
paper.
I fell
in
love
with
your story.
Not
your
body.
Is
there
a
place
to
place
my
body
beside
you?
I’m
Undecided.
Your
tale
is
my
souvenir.
Can we
leave it
at
that?
Not try
to extend
the franchise
on our
love.
Be more or less to each other.
Exactly, git while the gittin’s good.
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Hi Michael, delighted to hear from you. Just in case your comment gets lost in my translation would you care to explain more about the meaning of your words. Love m
I
like the
way you
write
!
Thank you! I love the way you write so your appreciation means very much to me. Lovely day. Michele
Forced Entry made me proud of your poetry, real first class poem but a little sad about its content being more or less is a living in a parallel universe and that’s a bit difficult but not impossible to achieve love e
eliza, thank you so much for your comment and your appreciation. This is the first time I’ve written a poem about sexual abuse. Hope you understand where I’m coming from and who this is about. Love m
This delivery was great for the content of the poem. Love the “i fell in love with your story, not your body” I may borrow that line
Thank you for your kind words. Are you seeking permission to use one of the lines in my poem? Peace and blessings. Michele
Yes indeed, I’ll be sure to credit you if I do of course
Thanks for taking the time to read some of my stuff. I loved this poem. The style as well as the words. It’s actually very powerful and I like it a lot.
I see the feather in the tree, unforced, gentled by the breeze, touched by the love that wrapped its quill. never have i heard the question so simply asked and beautiful and brave. If our hearts meet, not yours and mine but any we are together, walking lying, loving together in a larger body.
nice poem,
Alex
Wonderful story. Very powerful. Your an amazing writer. Michele thank you for taking the time to catch up on my blogs. I am sooo glad you liked many of them. Stay blessed, and keep up the good work.
This is wonderful. This conflict of perspective is there so often in attraction. But, I love how this is worded. Wishing you all the best at your exhibition (never received the details I suppose you got busy). Anyway, break a leg, as they say. š